| "The Awakening" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 02:01 CDT
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I simply LOVE you for writing this - those last two lines are killer with the infusion of a bit of attitude from the melodic descriptions of their plight. ^_^
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 06:36 CDT
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Woo hoo! Your last line just slew me! It was so sentimental and warm up to that and then BAM! LOL!! Great job!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice poem. Well done!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 10:54 CST
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Oh yes, this is even better the second time around. Very nicely done, wonderfully vivid retelling of their ordeal.
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Title: Very nice.
Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 10:00 CST
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Just a few brief words to let you know that I really liked the poem. The last line had me chuckling it fit so perfectly.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_luvs_kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 08:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it ^_^ Heheh You always write the best poems! *Jealousy* I swear, by the time the battle ends, Inuyasha's gonna need a crap load of therapy.
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