| "To Have The Love Of The General" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when will you be updateing it so weird to have such a great start only to be left hanging
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Title: To Have The Love Of The General
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 07:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, if toga takes kagome as his mate and she turns into a hanyou or a full demon then where does inuyasha come from? also why did sess try to kill her the first time they met? this is a good story but the timeline is a little more confusing than before. sess is born, kagome becomes his step mom, something happens to kagome, sess grows up and hates inuyasha, kikyo seals inuyasha, kagome unseals inuyasha, kagome travels to the past to become sess step mom, a few hundred years later kagome is born.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww. lil sesshy. ~sessh- i dont do puppy eyes. ~tba- u dont do nice either. ~sessh- touch'e ~tba-... that explains so much. though not everything.. ~inu- omg! im in love with my step mom! ~kags- wat! ~sesssh- ur not born yet u idiot! ~tba- yea. u gotta wait a few hundred years 4 sessh 2 grow into a teen. then u get born. then u gotta be a teen. then u gotta wait another 50 years or so. ~kags- and to think u suck at both math and sense. `inu- huh/ wait sessh has to... huh? ~tba- its no use. ~sessh-i think u confused him. ~kags- that or he jumped into the well & lost his brain 2. ~tba-*gasp* inuyasha has a BRAIN! whay didnt anyone tell me!? ~inu- u guyz just love to torture me dont u. ~tba- mm hm. ~sessh- my favirote hobby. ~kags- sure. ~inu- just close the review. ~tba- uh.. ok. bye! update soon! i loved it. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Redi Hebi On: February 22, 2008 00:38 CST
Comment/Review:
great story update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: February 21, 2008 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Would love to read more of this. Please update as soon as you can. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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