| "Aftertaste of Ashes" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 22:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really hope you continue this story. I was hooked within the first few chapters of Hazard Pay. You are very talented and your style of writing combined with your large vocabulary makes for very easy, fluid reading. And let me just say, your characterizations rock! :) I'm putting you on alert and will wait very very patiently for chp 6.
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Reviewed By: reicheru_x [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read Hazard Pay and thought it was great I really enjoyed reading it very good story... I was thrilled to find this but its not finished :( i was really getting into it as its a really great story and now I am like whats going on so please finish i really want to read more :D Its really a great story
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Title: keep writing!
Reviewed By: Britni Fullmetal Otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read all of your story and really really loved it!!!! i love the whole reno and cloud thing you got going on. you really keep them in character and everything. good job! you need to update though i wanna know what else is going to happen next!!!!
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Reviewed By: slasheroo On: April 24, 2008 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant! But this one isn't finished yet though is it? I read Hazard Pay first, all in one go and loved it. You clearly have a way with words! There were just some spelling and grammatical errors, but other than that I loved the way you wrote this. Made me feel like I was there, watching it all unfold xD I never thought that pairing could work but hey! You made it work ;) Hope to read more from you in the future ^^
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Reviewed By: FF7_adventchildren_reno_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 08:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm giving you tens all the way across the board. Hot damn this is good. I read hazard pay out of curiousity and got hooked, you have a real talent. I now am a Reno/cloud fan.
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