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 Reviewed By: You WHORE, firefly69  On: March 23, 2008 15:25 CDT
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CONTINUED FROM PREVIOUS POST--- When Dear Sweet God was handing out brains (and beauty for that matter) you were SEVERLY short-changed, nasty heifer! When you were born, a thousand black snakes must have 'mysteriously' disappeared of the face of our planet. Slither back into the dark abyss from whence you and your abhorrent family reared your monstrous, misshapen heads, you satanical animal! You are a COK-SUCKING, accursed 'VOYEUR' and 'DYKE'! I hope you NEVER find happiness in your meaningless life, you pungent dick-WAD!! INGNORANT KNOB! Filthy FUCKER! I know you are starved and deprived but do you HAVE to DROOL as you're reading this, you stupid letch!?! Just because nobody's given you the FUCKING half-hearted time of day before, you inept, BABOON! 'Go to the red-light district'- YOU PRACTICALLY LIVE THERE YOU VACUOUS HOOKER! Don't respond to me freak! I am on the verge of COMPLETELY losing my temper with you. CHOKE ON YOUR VOMIT, PERVERTED DRAG-QUEEN!!!
 Title: You ick-wads can't even spell!
Reviewed By: DROP DEAD, firefly69!!  On: March 23, 2008 15:23 CDT
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Okay, mother-fucking hoe, 'Firefly69'. It's on, you lesbian-bitch of a fucking slut!!!! How dare you reply to me, you shit-breathed piece of Dog cunt juicer!!??? Yeah, perverts and STARVED mongrels like YOU (you ugly, cunt-licking hermaphrodite!!) enjoy ass-wipes (Do you know what that is, BITCH!!!?? I know you're such a malodorous, pile of horse-fly defecation and that you can't afford such a luxury but think back to that time when you had your androgynous mom's smelly, crusty cock in your mouth…People use them to wipe shit apertures like your mouth!! Although, they usually find them on the OTHER side of the human anatomy!!) like this that are unfathomably being dubbed 'stories'. Say, what are the chances that you are his gorilla-of-a-mother, huh? God knows you MUST be as ugly as that she-male. You stupid, disgusting, depraved, putrid, abhorrent, filthy, slutty, shit-faced, UGLY WHORE!!!!! How dare you reply to me, you brainless baboon!!? It is an insult to my esteemed self to have to deign to converse with a monkey like you!!!! You are a carnal cunt. Nobody would ever want to fuck You so THAT'S why you adhere to this shit; it's the only way YOU'D ever have a chance of 'pleasuring' yourself. Is that what you do, you bull-shitting BITCH!!? Wank off while you read this garbage?!!! Probably into auto-asphyxiation as well, you depraved monkey!! God knows that there aren't may ways you can pleasure yourself. YUCK! You're probably SALIVATING as you read this because you are so touched by the fact that someone is giving your filthy, cunnilingus-performing, GAY ass the time of day!! You disgusting, degenerate, debauchee! You hideous, orgy-loving banshee! Finished your daily romping session have you? Salivating over the memories are you? Incestuous orgies must be amongst the best times of your pointless existence! You filthy gluttonous, pile of pig-SHIT.! You are SUCH a putrid mound of afflicted, vile, feculent, noisome, mephitic defecation that even the most famished dung-beetle wouldn't consider the likes of you in order to satiate their appetite!! You suck your pimp-of-a-dad's DICK for him, you despicable prostitute! If you do a good job and after much pleading on your part, he probably returns the favour. I'm curious, whore-BITCH. How do you go about sucking a hermaphrodite? Most likely because your little, sad wiener makes for a disappointing romp, you just ask if he would give you a fucking rim-job. Yuck! I hope he washes his ugly,lice-infested moustache after that. Oh wait…that's right you satanists DON'T wash do you? Filthy euro trash! Stupid DYKE! I guess there are SOME perks to being intersex, aren't there? You can 'help' your useless mother out when your impotent father is wasted. Though your little three-incher can't be too satisfying especially when it's up your hooker-of-a-mother's HUGE wobbly **! I bet it's hairy AND lice-infested just like your rotten cunt. Like parent like offspring , they say. Go FUCK yourself. Oh right…You stupid, sterile, freak-of-nature that's ALL you EVER do. It's not like you could get someone to willingly stick their COCK in to you FILTHY, SLIMY vagina! Perhaps, I'm mistaken. Your father probably ruptured your dirty hymen when he wasn't getting 'any' from your trashy-mother or did you just rape your brother, wench? Where's your precious 'dark inferno'? You so 'valiantly' came to 'its' ( I refuse to ascribe a gender to that demon spawn) aid but where is IT when YOU are on the receiving end of my wrath. That's right, slut-wench! IT doesn't give a flying monkey's, half-arsed FUCK about your hairy, putrid ASS, does IT?! There you go. Was that another attempt of getting your fat, empty head up ITS malodorous, hairy backside? Ha-ha! IT doesn't regard you at all. Get your cunt-licking tongue out of ITS heinie and register the facts, you stupid little baby. YOU.ARE.WORTHLESS! You aren't worth jack-SHIT!!! UTTERLY.POINTLESS! When Dear Sweet God was handing out brains TO BE CONTINUED
 Reviewed By: YOU UGLY SHIT!!!  On: March 23, 2008 14:49 CDT
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YOU SUCK!!! You mother-fucking pile of malodorous pig-shit!!!!! How dare you 'write' (a word I use laxly in context as it would be insulting to other actual writers to ascribe that word in its entirety to you, you UGLY DOG!!!!!) suck audacious shit!!!!??? You will delete this. That is an order.
 Reviewed By: Firefly69  On: March 18, 2008 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HBHB SHUT THE HELL UP YOUR NOT GOING TO DO ANYTHING ALOT OF PEOPLE LIKE THIS STORY AND ALL OF HIS OTHERS SO STOP BEING A BITCH AND SHUT THE FUCK UP. I VOTING A 10 ON THIS FANFICTION
 Reviewed By: HBHB  On: March 06, 2008 13:47 CST
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Look, I don't know what the FUCK your problem is you stupid wanker! You write that you want people to write more G/V then you come out with shit like this!? That's it. If you continue this story, I promise you pain. Make no mistake, shit-head. You don't know what I am capable of! Do not test. That is omsething I cannot emphasise enough. You have been warned Lewis Mountford, werewolf gohan, dark inferno, whatever shit name you're going by now. I am not the sort of individual to be trifled with. You are going to stop this shit RIGHT NOW. That is not a request; it is an order, pure and simple. I actually feel like laughing, so easy is it for me to hurt you. Someone with my mastery of computer science can track a little pedophile like you down in an instant. Mnay other so-called 'authors' have been dealt with for this canonical blasphemy and you will be no different. This is my first and LAST warning to you, bastard.

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