| "In Plain Sight" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: March 04, 2008 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter and the way you flashed back and forth. I'm kind of surprised by how easily we were able to follow the different scenes and timelines. This story has GREAT promise and I hope you get inspired for the next chapter soon! Thanks for posting!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 05:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooo they bumped into each other :P and dont they have a picture of her?? ooo wait... HA Kagome changed her idenity XD
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 01:37 CST
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ooo im hooked line and sinker lol
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm always game for a good Inuyasha detective story. This was great, and I wonder, which of the two girls survived? I will certainly look forward to your next chapter. Chanda
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great beginning to the story though I am sad that Souta and Grandfather both had to die. I am curious how Inuyasha and Kagome find each other and get together. I look forward to future chapters.
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 16:06 CST
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Such a sad, but interesting start. I can't wait to read more and I'm totally pushing for it to be an Inu/Kag. :]
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Reviewed By: GinBlossom On: February 23, 2008 12:05 CST
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Absolutely fabulous start. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Bds13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!!!!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter. *_*
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