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| "Midnight Syndicate" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Emo Girl On: July 09, 2008 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet story. The last chappie was really sensual and thrilling. Please, keep writting. You're really good at what you do!!! I'm on the edge of my seat right now, wondering the what crap is going to happen!! XD KYAH!! Are Hajame and Midnight gonna have some kind of relationship develop? And what about poor innocent Saya? Is she going to be saved?! Please update soon!!
| Reviewed By: AM On: June 01, 2008 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh, this is...way too all over the place. A little continuity, exposition, and defined plot would be nice.
| Title: homg!
Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more!! i want to met Midnight's fathers. oh squee >.
| Reviewed By: Hikaru Itsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 16:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah, maybe yo do what are you writing xD, lol I really like this, is so diferent, so keep writing, it's really good, now I have my doubts xD about Hajime, is he really a human?? xDD Well til next chapter
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