| "Underneath the Underneath" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Krysty On: January 20, 2009 19:34 CST
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I liked this! It was interesting seeing inside the two main guys' heads! It adds a lot more spice to their characters, especially the fact that Naruto is really the complete opposite of "himself". Great so far! Please write, well type, more!!!
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Reviewed By: Fee.. On: April 01, 2008 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE continue!! I love your writing style...it's positively beautiful!!! I will be an avid reader!
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Reviewed By: silverstein On: March 06, 2008 16:21 CST
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I really enjoy your take on the two characters. Especially how Naruto is completely opposite of the happy-go-lucky attitude he always has. PLEASE WRITE MORE! I realy wanna c where u go w/ this cuz i'm sure it'll be fascinating!
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Title: I like it!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 05, 2008 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story, it immediatly caught my attention. I like how you got into Sasuke and Naruto's heads, its like their haunted by 2 diffrent people and it gives them a nice edge. Cant wait to see more from you, ja ne! ;)
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Reviewed By: Emmee On: February 25, 2008 19:01 CST
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Oh, please do continue! I am left very intrigued ^.^ and typing differently too...^^;
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