"Silver Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: response to Sum190 Reviewed By: auronsgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 15:18 CDT Comment/Review: Thank you for the review. I appreciate your honesty. All of your comments have been taken into account, and my story will be rewritten. I just wanted to say that it wasn't supposed to be beauty that Neji fell for; it was supposed to be her courage and her willingness to fight. I have to work on conveying that to my audience. But thank you again! *waves*
| Title: Well... Reviewed By: Sum190 On: March 25, 2008 14:17 CDT Comment/Review: I Suppose this could work for some, but i found that it just wasnt as "believable" as the others. Neji isnt exactly the kind to trust someone just for beauty. Naruto, pervert as he is, wouldnt just Flirt with someone right off the bat. Has for the bloodline, it was pretty well thought up, but it seemed slightly, well, Useless. Kudos on the bloodline btw, havent heard of 1 like that before :) l8r
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