| "Together in Spirit" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: shadowalker666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2012 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting and different story. I am enjoying it quite a bit and hope to see another chapter before too long. |
Reviewed By: crimsonskydeath [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2011 17:31 EDT
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Have any idea on when your next chapter will be posted? |
Title: Glad to see 1.5 fixed!
Reviewed By: TheMiko On: April 23, 2010 21:29 EDT
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Thank you for fixing On Thin Ice 1.5, could you please do whatever you did to fix it to chapter 2.0 as well? :D
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Title: Chapter 7 is unreadable. Painfully so.
Reviewed By: Megatyrant On: April 07, 2010 08:11 EDT
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I seriously hope that something screwed up your posting of chapter 7, or in other words, that it isn't your own fault. It is, in the current state, completely unreadable. Something like "Author ID1: at (insert date and time here)" and so on shows up EVERYWHERE. I strongly suggest that you fix this as soon as you have the time to do so. Megatyrant out.
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Reviewed By: TheMiko On: April 04, 2010 11:38 EDT
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Are you aware that On Thin Ice Part 1.5 and Part 2 are both unreadable?
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Title: umm...
Reviewed By: pikapika On: March 27, 2010 07:25 EDT
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the new chapters look weird they say Author ID 1 2 3 everywhere its very confusing could you please fix them thanks
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Title: On Thin Ice 1.5 and 2 both bad copies
Reviewed By: >_> On: March 19, 2010 13:25 EDT
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Actually, both of the two chapters added over the last few days has [Author ID] brackets throughout the story. You will need to repost both chapters after fixing this.
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Title: Chapter 6 is unreadable
Reviewed By: >_> On: March 19, 2010 13:22 EDT
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Your chapter 6 "On Thin Ice 1.5" is currently unreadable. Constantly throughout the chapter is "[Author ID1 at March blah blah blah" which ruins the ability to read it.
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Title: Lapi? Lapi?
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Had to look at Pretty Cure on Youtube. You're doing a pretty good job of it. Keep it up! Ciao, Wes
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Reviewed By: Mega Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 21:50 EDT
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I hope you add another chapter soon I can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: Mega Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 22:13 EDT
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I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Mega Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 09:42 EST
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Nice story. Don't know much about pretty Cure but I can learn.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 23:15 EST
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Hmmmm, interesting. Continue to update, I guess, ja ne. PS: what the heck is the series that Lapi comes from? I don't think I've ever heard of it (though I think I have seen a bunny like thing with a ball in it's neck. Weird stuff.
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