| "What Your Eyes Can Do" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Reviewed By: kitsune_youkai_jade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi there i was wondering are you goin to do the follow up on this story? it's a really good fic please update ^_^
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Reviewed By: loopy911 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 04:01 CDT
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you know I'd really apreseate that update right about............. now
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 01:06 CDT
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this was another great story, now onto the sequel.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2008 10:18 CST
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AH! That just made me want the next chapter all the more!!! So mean!
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 21:08 CST
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O,o its a tad short but i like it anyway! ^^
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Reviewed By: lilangelchr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it please update soon
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! O_O
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!! I'M SO HAPPY TO HEAR THAT THERE WILL IN DEED BE A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY...I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT AND FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND HOPE IT'S UP SOON
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Reviewed By: Sexy lips On: March 02, 2008 02:32 CST
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YOU HAVE TO WRITE ONE MORE CHAPTER PLEASE DO THEY FIND EACH OTHER PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! THRERE ARE SO MANY UNCLOSED DOORS I BEG OF YOU ONE MORE JUST TO CLOSE IT OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahem you really shouldnt keep this as a one shot...i wanna see what would happen if they all found out....oh please please add more to the story..
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Reviewed By: SlightlyMadHatter [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 21:57 CST
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Very very good. I do hope that there is a second chapter involved in this story...
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Reviewed By: jvalo On: February 28, 2008 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so totally loved this! I thought to myself, OMG her friend is Inu, and he's at dad's house , and Sess is going there, and she is there, so yay they're gonna meet! But then they barely missed each other and I have been left hanging and this amanda just can't have that! lol... great job though!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't go for the Sess/Kag pairing, but that's just because I don't like all the Inu/Kag angst that's usually involved with the setup, which you conveniently eliminated in this story. Keyword: STORY. I agree with the general consensus. We need at LEAST one more chapter here! You can't just leave it like it is!
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Title: ONESHOT?
Reviewed By: eireverde [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 19:58 CST
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you think this is a ONESHOT?? hopefully you change your mind and aren't cruel enough to make us fill in where we were left hanging! (good job on it, though!)
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG girl. You have to keep on going with this one even if it is only one or two more chapters.. It was AWESOME to say the least.. Love the Lemony goodness. I really would like the see the look on Sesshomaru's face when he realizes that Kagome is his half-brothers friend... so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this one.
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! Good song choice too! Are you planning on writing a second part? I was like, "DUDE they just missed each other! ARRRG!" As always, you did an awesome job...catch ya later.. :)
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Reviewed By: rosymouse [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 15:44 CST
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After reading this one, I get the feeling that there will have to be a another chapter, just to tie up all those lovely loose ends. When I first saw it, I honestly thought" why isn't she finishing off the other ones first" and then I realised that it had to come out. whiskey
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 14:33 CST
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Very good start to a story! I can't wait for you to continue it! Please update soon!
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