"My Passionate Ninja" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: marie33 On: March 03, 2008 19:49 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is really captivating! I can't believe what's going through Sasuke's head! It would be cool if you made it an mpreg, but not an outlandish reason...if that makes sense ^_^ This fic seems like it'll have alot of angst, but hopefully in the end they'll be together. Can't wait for chapter 3!
| Reviewed By: devinlydemonic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 08:39 CST Comment/Review: i really like if you made it mpreg it would be so cool please update soon if only my sake
| Reviewed By: Revine On: February 28, 2008 22:02 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh wow! I definately would love it if you made this an MPreg, but you're the author and it's your call. I really enjoyed these first two chapters and the fact that they came from both points of view. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more in the future! Ja Ne, Revine
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