| "Take Me Away" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Darkcanisvulpes On: November 30, 2010 19:05 EST
Comment/Review:
not being mean here but ya need a warning about the rape of inu part |
Title: Enjoyable
Reviewed By: jdbbrz [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2010 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this and loved it. I loved the birth of the puppies and the tenderness could use a slight touch more description but I loved it and I read the little bit about boys at the end of chapter 10 I love reading about guys and watching movies starring guys well as long as they aren't portrayed as complete idiots and morons besides guys are just more interesting than girls we girls just tend to be boring and thank you so much for your great story will there be anymore or is this the end please let me know.
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2010 16:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
oh wow, the first yaoi story i've ever read!^^ you just set my expectations really high! well done, can't wait to read more of this goodness ^.~!!
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Reviewed By: Nanishisummer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2010 22:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always I enjoyed reading the new chapter then went and reread the whole story. lol Never have got a chance to write a review for it before but had to say this time that I really enjoy this story and hope you will keep it going.
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Reviewed By: iqvada On: March 01, 2008 07:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word... "loved it" hmmm... make it 2 words... anyways :D plz update soon ur fic is absolutly lovely... reading it was a pleasure... so update soon ^-^
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Reviewed By: wolfluv13 On: February 29, 2008 06:49 EST
Comment/Review:
BOO I SAY BOO TO THE NAY SAYERS VIVA LE WRITTERS OF FANFICTION WHO DO IT AS BEAUTIFULLY AS YOU DO!!! If they don't like tell them to writer thier own story! You're right about them but I give firstgraders more credit though! THANK YOU TO YOU AND YOUR MUSE FOR BREATHING NEW LIFE INTO THIS PAIRING!!! IT HAS BEEN A LITTLE WHILE SINCE I HAVE TRULY BEEN ABLE TO ENJOY SUCH A WORK OF ARTFUL WRITING! I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR STORY TO THE FULLEST!!! THANK YOU FOR YOUR BEAUTIFUL MIND AND MUSE AND ONE OF THE BEST DISCRIBE STORYS YET TO BE WRITTEN!!!
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