| "The Dragon's Whisper" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 03:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! This is the begining of what promises to be a fantastic B/V fanfiction. I love the way you've built the feeling between them it promises well for later chapters. The interaction between Bulma and Vegeta is so intelligently done, and I'm glad to see that Yamcha is portrayed in such a good light. Welldone Psyfire, I look forward to reading more. *huggles* Ember |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so-o well written! The only reason you got a 9 and not a 10 is . . . .I don't know when to expect the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: sa On: July 04, 2002 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is certain differently as others. I LIKE IT VERY MUCH. Hope you will contuine. REALLY GOOD. THANKS :) |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool, so far this has intrigued and grabbed my attention. I'm glad you think my art is cool as well, it makes me happy to know someone that isn't a friend likes my work. I'll keep up with this fic as it progresses and i'll be more than happy to review every chapter. As will my cohort in training.
Chibi-Dacra: (smiles around cookie) Hfiffi!!
Me: Yeah...anyway, I'll review the next chappie when it comes out. Byeee!!! :) |
Reviewed By: OujoNoSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only 1 review?! That sucks!!! Lol, your story is great! Actually, a pretty interesting view. Most of the fanfics about the famous 3 years (such as my own 8coughcough*) is the pretty basic, Vegeta hates Bulma, Bulma hates Veegta. Here we have a very interesting view on both in a pretty I use her for her mind, I use him for the challenge type thing. Give and take relationship! How very original! Excellent, please write more! It sounds good so far! |
Reviewed By: IneiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
OOhhh... Very cool. ^_^ I'm enjoying this quite a bit so far. I hope that you update soon! ^_^ |
