Title: Cool!!!! XD
Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, this was awesome!! Mind if I make a few suggestions??? 9_9 It's Zapper Zaku, not Zapper Zako (sorry, he's one of my favorite characters( . And I love your writing style, but try to put some more decribtion with your diolgue. Sorry, I'm weird like that. But you're new here aren't you?? Welcome to Mediaminer and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! XD
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