Reviewed By: trichloroethane [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting concept...like the previous reviewer said, there doesn't seem to be much Neopets to this...but I guess it's all the same to me *shrugs*. Quite funny, but it got a little random towards the end, which detracted from the first few chapters. Also, the spelling left a lot to be desired...I mean, 'are' instead of 'our'? Come on. The style was all right, but it was rather...bare bones i.e. there was no description, just a slapdash job. Overall, it was a good shot and you pulled it off nicely, but if you tidied up the spelling and tried to spend a little more time making each chapter it would make the fic even nicer. Hope this review helped.
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