| "Becoming a Lady" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Lalai On: June 09, 2008 07:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
So far, apart from multiple people talking in same paragraph, which i think has already been stated, the fanfiction seems fine, well done and such. However, more information is needed before we can come up with even better critisism for your piece, so please update! =D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is interesting! I was wondering who is getting paired up with Rin and I'm like ok... no idea... then InuYasha??? then certainly NOT InuYasha and then you bring Sesshy into the mix... it was VERY well done.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 22:06 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it and the only thing (in my opinion) that makes it confusing is having dialogue from multiple people in one paragraph. thanks for posting!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice start. I like this, it's definately got some mystery and suspense woven in there. It'll be a great fic, I can tell!
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Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 14:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you are off to a good start.one thing -- given that wolves killed her, wouldn't she have every reason to HATE the Lord presented to her? And wouldn't Sess be senistive to that?
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 03, 2008 14:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you have something very interesting here. I hope that Inu find his mate in this story. I hope that this story will focus mainly on Rin and Sess. Update really soon.
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 12:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Fantastic! I was wondering if this story correlates to your other fic, seeing how you wrote about how Inuyasha's mate had suddenly disappeared. If so, awesome! I was curious as to how Sessh got with Rin. I'm excited to read more!
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