Title: hehe.. guD j0B!
Reviewed By: LadyCisqua [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 04:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hEY! uhMnn.. leT's just put it this way.. hehe... the story's 'wordy' too much words in the dialogue that i think isn't much needed.. but i know you creZ.. you can write better than this.. i know.. the 'first-time' headache must be causing too much havoc.. hehe.. still.. keep iT uP gurL!!! i would love to read/know the ending.. hehe God Bless!!!
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