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| "Hikkomi Houou" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: More
Reviewed By: Nysk01 On: December 08, 2011 00:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wish there was more of this. | Reviewed By: Lerris On: July 19, 2008 05:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good so far, but so far it is too short to make much of beyond the obvious angst fest.
| Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: March 17, 2008 08:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! This is a little outside my usual stomping grounds (Evangelion & Love Hina are more to my taste), but I'm always open to new things. Plus, I've just bought the first season of Ah! My Goddess on DVD, so I'm curious about the FanFiction being written about it. -- But I digress. -- Ranma/Ah! My Goddess fics usually work well. As you've stated, if anyone deserves a wish, its Ranma. And you are off to a fine start here. You have captured not only the bleakness of his existence, but the possible path out the other side very well. I truly hope you see fit to bring this to some sort of conclusion. It would be a crime not to, in my opinion. -- Anyway, its an excellent piece of writing, and I look forward to reading more in the near future. Later! T
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 23:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, not bad. Very depressing, but it's getting interesting. Neh, and very worth reading. COntinue to update here on mediaminer, and I promise to review. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 02:13 EST
Comment/Review:
So far the edit/rewrite is going pretty well. It is a huge improvement. Just like you said all the extra cross overs and the tons of pointless characters they brought caused to much confusion and made things more complicated then they had to be. Even the simplest of actions took for ever to get done if you have to watch 10+ people in a house. So far not much has really changed, more like you edited out the useless bits from before and what remains is basicaly the same. I look forward to the future chapters and seeing where this is going.
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