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| "Six Gifts" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: naioka1992 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2010 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I admit, if I had known this would be a Hermione/Snape I wouldn't have read it, but you've given me a new appreciation for this pairing :) I love the way Hermione keeps second-guessing who her admirer is, and the way Snape mixes up the messages at the end is so well done, as well. I didn't expect you to resolve it like that, but it was very satisfying :) I didn't notice any spelling/grammar errors, but I only gave you a 9 for Originality because the 'series of gifts for valentine's day' is quite old. However, I can say you put a pleasing new spin on it :D Thanks for posting xx
| Title: Six Gifts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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