| "Trapped" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2010 22:15 CDT
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This is getting so good! I'm glad you started writing again. I can't wait for what happens next. I'm guessing where he's going and trying to figure it out. I look forward to seeing if I'm right.
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Reviewed By: 1animegal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea!! That was really good chapter. I cant wait for the next one. I just put out my first chapter of my first story. It would mean a lot to me if you read it and tell me what you think about it. Thanks Ja!
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Title: *Shock*
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 21:34 CDT
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This was an amazing update! OMG! I cant believe you didnt update sooner!! Grr... i loved it. LOVED IT! i think it should be beta'd, but it was amazing!!! This world you created is amazing and you need to update sooner!! Its unfair to just LEAVE this... come back to us soon. Drowning in tears, ~F-J
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 19:20 CDT
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I thought that you said that this was not going to be good...you lied! It was so good and so sad. My heart breaks for Naruto because of Sasuke and at the same time I feel for Sasuke because he thinks he's destined to be alone and unloved. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 11:14 CDT
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That was so sad. I'm on the verge of tears. You did a great job on the update.
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Title: Next please!
Reviewed By: 1animegal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I just wanted to know when the next chapter is coming out. Its a very good story to read and I cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 04:01 CDT
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Hotness. Please update soon. Love it.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 14:47 CDT
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I really like this chapter. I can relate. When you love someone who constantly makes you want to oh I don't know, beat them senseless, they end up doing something or saying something that takes your breathe away and all is forgiven. I almost forgot about Kiba. That was good to have Sasuke do that because of it. I can't wait to see how this unfolds in the future.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 19:09 CDT
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I really enjoy this so far. I can't wait to see how this turns out.
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Title: Just wanted to say..
Reviewed By: AvalonAri [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following the fic. Can't wait for future chapters. Love it!!
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: March 10, 2008 19:36 CDT
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I like the story update soon please!
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Title: Gasp!
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! Not only are ALL the relationships gay, you made them kiss!!! I absolutely love this story and you NEED to update soon!! I'm glad I'm the first... sort of, but I think its all perfect. Only one suggestion- that you make the chapters longer. But you really dont have to as long as you update sooner, cuz I'd take shorter chapters any day as long as I get them sooner. But thats mostly just 'cause I'm greedy and love your story too much;-D! Please update soon!
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