| "The Long Way Home" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It's sooo funny. Please update soon. This story is great.
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Reviewed By: Nessa On: July 26, 2003 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, sadly that reminded me of my family in West Virginia lol! I reallllly loved it! Origional, enjoyable, and down right funny! Really wished we could see some Vegeta and the hillbilly girl action but ah well. LOL! |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: April 08, 2003 11:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it so far. Keep writing, it is great. I wanna know what happens. |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 21:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Your story is SOOOO funny! I hope chapter 22 will be posted sooooooon!!! Anyone in the mood for some lemonad? |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol it's great so far i hope you keep going and the kitty pics of vegeta and bulma are adorable |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: December 10, 2002 02:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep going! it is a great fic! |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! *Mouth hangs open* This has got to be one of the best fics I've ever read! And I mean it too! Not only is it a great plot, but you didn't make mistakes most people do when they write. Won't go into detail about that, and just thought I'd let ya know that you should have way more reviews and that I'll be waiting for an update ^_~
Ja ne!
~Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One* |
Reviewed By: Tiffany On: November 11, 2002 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He he he *Thinking of Vegeta as an old Fart* He he he, I just have to say your a true GENIUS , I absolutely love this Fanfiction! It has everything up to action,romance,cute,funny no hilarious and all these twist and turns oh, its just Superb! It's better than a 10, I think all B/V fans should read this, and i'll bet they'll laugh there ass off! My personal favorites are "The old Switch-a-roo" and " The Child Plays" but wait who am I kidding there all Great! no BETTER THAN GREAT !!!
And i'll bet they'll only get better and juicier! :) I just think your a true matermind MoonSaiyanPrincess, and I truly hope you'll up date this soon
Your Fan Tiff |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooooo!!! What's Veggie-boy(literally, hehe:) yelling about? Is something going to attack Bulma or something?? Will he save her?? *vein trobs in forehead* Aaaahhh, the pressure!!
*gulp* And I hope what Vegeta fears does NOT come true(sort of).
*I have a bad feeling about this. If we're in her past childhood, we're most likely going to go to...my past childhood. Her
childhood is so carefree, I don't think she'll last in mine*
*gulps again* I DON'T like the sound of that ... eep!!
...and the preview of the next chapter seems pretty iffy as well ...
I don't know what's wrong with you vegeta?
What the Hell happened!? *lightbulb flashes* ... I don't suppose you story chapter (Child's Play) is alluding to ... *is trying not to swallow her tongue from gulping so much* ... the film of the same name?? O.o
*chuckles* SERiously, this fic is SO awesome!! It reminds me of the original Sliders (*sniff* I miss that show...) ... not that that's a bad thing because this fic is SO awesome!! *blinks* I need a thesaurus...
WHY haven't I reviewed up until now, well ... honest, I didn't know it was incomplete and I just found this fic last week. I've been reading the chapters at every chance I got (which wasn't as often as I would've liked:(. If I KNEW that it was incomplete ... then I probably would've reviewed every chapter!! And I DO mean EVERY chapter... because they're all worth reviewing!!! ;)
Keep writing new chapters or ... or ... I'll start writing them for you!! *lol* Just kidding! :p Maybe I'll just go back and write a LONG review for each chapter-- yeah, that's it!! BeWARE my reviews ... ^_~
OH! And before I forget ... last Thursday when I went to bed after I finished reading a chapter of this story, I couldn't sleep. Uh, before you ask, that was both a good AND bad thing. Good because I kept thinking up all sorts of new worlds that Bulma and Vegeta could end up in (which I would PROUDLY share if you ever need any ideas!! ...not that they're anywhere NEAR as good as your ideas...). And that's BAD because 1, I was tempted to write them down and I didn't want to encroach upon your idea and 2, I DIDn't write them down so I only remember a couple of the crappy ones! -_- oopsies ... |
Reviewed By: Lean On: July 23, 2002 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cute the hell with cute i love it! update update update. you got a great story so keep it up and to all of u who didn't read it this is a MUST read fanfic. got that a MUST READ FANFIC. peace out! :) :) |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 08:33 CDT
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haha. I luv the story, it's one of my favs by you. Are you going to put all your stories on mediaminer or do we have to wait for ff.net to get back up? |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! I'm one of your biggest fans!! And I read this story like 100 times on fanfiction and I know for a fact there are ALOT more chapters!! COMMON ALREADY!! WHAT HAPPENED ABOUT THE RIDING HOOD SEX??? |
