| "Sometimes a Fish is Just a Fish" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 00:20 CDT
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Ah, yes! I loved the way Sesshoumaru told Inu off about how he had let Kagome slip through his fingers. (The 'chasing undead tail' line had me snickering. ^_^) But while his declaration was a steamy one full of his appreciation for Kagome's physical attributes, it would have been nice if he'd included a little bit of feeling, too. I liked Kouga coming to lead Inu away. Sess' thoughts about letting him live were great. ^_^ I'm wondering if you have more planned for this? (And I'm half-wondering if Kouga and Inu are going to end up consoling each other? ^_~ Of course, it never would have come to this if Inu hadn't been going to see Kikyou. I hope he will realize it wasn't worth it. He took Kagome's loyalty and her love for him for granted. So, I say, let him suffer. No being happy with Kikyou! LOL! ^_^)
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 00:06 CDT
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(SECOND CHAPTER) Oh,lordy! That was hilarious! And I didn't see it coming! Poor Sesshoumaru. I am so glad you are keeping this going, -- it's wonderfully entertaining!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 23:59 CDT
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Loved it! A great "red herring" fic. ^_~ It wasn't until about 3/4 through that I thought it was going to turn out to be someone else, and I didn't know if it would be Sess or Kouga. I knew from the title that Inu had to be talking about a fish, while she was talking about something else entirely. ^_^ And I really loved the way you threw Sango's thoughts and conclusions into the mix there. LOL! This was great!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 17:28 CDT
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i actually feel bad for inuyasha. i also would like to know when sesshomaru became so sauve. i loved his little speech to inuyasha about kagome's worth. i glad someone saw her for herself and not kikyo. good story. update soon.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 02:43 CDT
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this is one of the funniest things that i've ever read. i love comedy, i love sarcasm, i love ironic twists. you have them all. i usually avoid all the sesshoumaru/kagome stories, but i'm so glad that i read this one! thank you so much for all the laughs this story gave me.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 23:37 CDT
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I also have to say that a one-shot is only one chapter long, hence the name "one-shot". So you should think about relabeling your story or merging those two chapters.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this very interesting. It was obvious that she wasn't seeing Miroku, but just when I thought it was Kouga you yanked the rug from under me. It was a great twist.
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Reviewed By: slushymermaid666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I 'lol'd pretty hard at the end there. XD I love this little tale thus far!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 00:13 CDT
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that was so good! i wonder when inuyasha will get a clue, will he actually have to see them together? please post again soon.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 01:57 CDT
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this was great! you kept me confused about who she was with until the very end. i would like to have more to this story both before it (how did they get together) and after it (everyone's reactions).
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Reviewed By: SexyLips [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 17:36 CDT
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DUDE that was the shit, i was sooo convinced that she was with miroku and how you pulled that one was awsome, well keep it up i hope you can update soon, i miss the daily updates but understand that life comes first, hope everything is going well. TATA FOR NOW
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Title: haha, you had me going there!
Reviewed By: SilentQuill23 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 03:06 CDT
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haha, wow. Like three twists in that story :) first the fish, then I thought she was with miroku but her and sesshomaru, YAY! haha good job :D
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Title: good one
Reviewed By: west On: March 11, 2008 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you had me going there. i realy thought it was miroku. you little stinker. well any who, you did a wonderful job. Keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice one...for a minute I thought she was sneaking around with Miroku, then Kouga...I should have thought harder ^_^ Man, Inuyasha is so, not really there at times huh. Great story!
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Title: fish...hahah
Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahaha that was wonderful....you almost had me believing that miroku and kagome were having a little thing.....but then you said that sango was ok with it so i was like nope not miroku.......that was great...a fish...muahahaha....good job.....10's all around
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