| "Inexorable Flow" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: inexorable flow
Reviewed By: spinel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's amazing that even though the fanfic is so long...i don't seem to get bored reading everything and i can't wait for the next chapter..every twist is very interesting..and the way you portray every character is very good..and the way you made each character mature is amazing..i just have one request to you..could you do some side stories to the trilogies?
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Reviewed By: faerygirl44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2009 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read all three in this trilogy and it is just amazing. Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: litayoliehci [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing. I have read all 3 parts so far and love it. I hope you keep up the amazing work. Yuram~~
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Reviewed By: Rachel123 On: October 18, 2008 11:32 CDT
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Man you're really making up the lack of smex in WOFTGE. My perfect recipe: great plot with just the right dosing of mansex. Mmhm.
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Reviewed By: rotsan On: July 24, 2008 06:01 CDT
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wouldn't it be kewl if he made preggy... that was awesome...
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Reviewed By: Sheinah [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 19:42 CDT
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Ha ha ha, I'm NEVER gonna complain about the amount of sex in your fic XD It's just too damn hot, I can't get enough lol I can't believe Kyota actually fucked that maid, and the idiot had the nerve to ask what was wrong. Well, he's still the moron I love so much XD Your last line...gods, the possibilities. From now on, I have absolutely no idea how the situation is going to evolve, or how Wolfram will react if Yuuri actually goes through with it. It sure is promising ^_^ And of course, Murata had to spread the news to Shouri. The opposite would have surprised me ^^; Anyway, this was absolute win :p
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Reviewed By: Sheinah [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 21:25 CDT
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Ha ha ha, Murata sure is one little manipulative bastard. At least he had enough sense to run for his life before Yuuri sliced his throat XD I'm glad Yuuri finally accepted Wolfram's decision. I'm sure it was one of the hardest things he ever had to do, but in the end, it was the only way to save his and Wolfram's relationship. I wonder how they will die with the situation later, though. When Wolfram will actually sleep with the woman and she becomes pregnant, they're gonna have a hard time. Ohhhh, Kyota his coming back! I can't wait to see him again. Usually I don't like OCs, but I completely fell in love with him in WOTP. He rocks lol Ahhh, the se scenes are as good as ever. There are few authors who can actually write lemons with just the right amount of details, pervertion and emotions, and you're doing one hell of a fine job ^_^ I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, as usual :)
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Reviewed By: xnamikazex On: May 26, 2008 09:53 CDT
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Well that came out of left field. At least it isn't Wolfram in some form of cheating like I thought. Interesting how this story is so much different from the last.
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Reviewed By: Sheinah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 13:56 CDT
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I'm sorry I didn't comment on the last two chapters! I read them, I swear, but it just got out of my mind. Sorry... Anyway, this is just soooo full of win. I really didn't see it coming. I just went like : OMG WTF!? I wonder how they're going to work things out. Add to that that they got attacked by some mysterious people. This is getting really interesting. Ah, back to the last chapter. The part with the handcuffs was damn hot XD Thank you for making me spend a wonderful time reading this ^_^
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Reviewed By: BelleoftheBall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 23:30 CDT
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Another? Wow. Like I think I mentioned in WOFTGE, that story is probably the only out the hundreds of fanfics I have read that I was following the whole journey, and it made me sad to lose it. Now I get more ^^ Don't have a clue whats in store, but its a nice start :)
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Reviewed By: Sheinah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 14:14 CDT
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That was hawt. Gods, they know how to drive each other crazy. And their fight o_O. Just wtf is going on in Yuuri's head? That was scary. Even if they solved it all in the end, I get the feeling it won't end there. This is promising ^_^ And I still absolutely love your lemons lol. They're so well written. Yuuri's "We haven't done it on the kitchen table yet" made me go looooooooool. Well done!
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Reviewed By: Sheinah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 12:20 CDT
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Oh god, that was hilarious. I'm so glad the sequel is up! I love the complicity between Yuuri and Wolfram. It really looks like they know each oter well. Poor Asami is still single, but at least seeing his friend with Wolfram doesn't disgust as much. And I can't wait to see Kyota again ^_^ The end of this chapter... I was laughing like a complete idiot XD Anyway, very good start, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter :)
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