| "Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Saro-chan On: September 15, 2013 06:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! A fanfic in which Allen stops worrying about himself and actually thinks about the fact that the Noah may finish off Road for betraying them. Nice and fluffy. Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter! P.s. note to the author: you DONT suck. |
Title: Good Story
Reviewed By: phoenix90 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2010 12:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more. It is a very good fan fic. And Chapter 9 does not suck!!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Inuyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2010 00:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you started this fanfiction. I'm such a RoadXAllen shipper and its difficult to find decent fanfiction with them. I think that in general I like the way the story is going. Maybe Allen fell for her a bit to fast, but otherwise, I'm very happy with how the story is headed. I also don't see many problems with the writing in general. I think you're doing a good job of describing what is going on and including thought and speech. I hope to see more chapters added.
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Title: Wondeful
Reviewed By: TheSilverTree On: July 12, 2009 13:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
extremely good i like the idea of Rhode pursuing her love of Allen and he returning it (spoiler) if you've read the manga you know that he too is a Noah i think if you plan on continuing this that maybe you incorperate that into an alternate timeline where he either joins the noah or Rhode and Allen both leave and roam on their own (just an idea seems how you were hinting at that in the first place)
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 20:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just read the 9th chapter and I don't think it sucks. I think it's pretty good. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 19:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the first chapter and I like it. I'm gonna keep reading.
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