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| "Masked" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 17:01 CDT
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Hmmm, interesting update. Heh, and I did like the idea of someone knowing Naruto was a serial killer, I mean, what, with the rules and all, he wouldn't hurt em. Hell, in Season 2 of the TV series, Dexter couldn't even kill Doaxs when he found out about him. Personally, I find that to be a sign of, well not morality, but a system of boundaries, that works. And for Naruto, same deal, his rules won't let him kill an innocent person. Besides, Anko can teach him to improve his technique, after all. Heh. Continue to update, will ya? Ja ne
| Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 08:48 CDT
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This story is awesome, I love the Naruto and Anko talk at the end.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 16:51 CDT
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Hmmm, so, I guess you went with the idea that Naruto had a sister in Karen. Heh. I've seen the idea before (hell, they both have similar personalities, frighteningly so in canon) and it does work as a cool mirror to Season 1 of Dexter. Heh. I do recommend watching Season 2, it's messier, but also begins to turn the TV show back towards the books (at one point in, episode 3 or 4, I think it was, Dexter mentions his 'dark passenger' an idea from the books). I'm thinking you might have read the books (though I could be wrong about that) because of how Naruto Monologues. Neh, it's unimportant. Either way, the first two chapters are well written, if a little short. Doesn't matter that much, you've pack a lot in with so little written. So, good job. So, I look forward to your next update. Ja ne.
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