| "Who's The Daddy?" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: thanks
Reviewed By: firekitten On: January 06, 2009 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank for the personal response that was awesome i feel all special now ^_^ and yes u did answer all my questions. i can't wait till the father comes to light. i think its gaara but what do i know. and i'm glad u gave the kid some screen time.
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Title: confused
Reviewed By: firekitten On: September 16, 2008 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic despite the slow updates (no offense). But I'm a little confused about certain things: 1.Does Naruto not remember who he slept with? 2.Did he sleep with all of them and the one who just happens to be the one to impregnate him is his mate? (which is what u seem to be hinting at) 3.Do the potential dads remember sleeping with him? 4.Does at least Kyubi remember something? 5.If the kid has black hair, then wouldn't Gaara no longer qualify? or is that just random like the purple eyes? I for one am rooting for Gaara, I can just picture him with the kid being all parental*awww*. I think that having a family with Naruto would be like a dream come true for him. He was clearly trying to get points with Naruto by being so nice to Hibiki (and with that kid being so cute it was easy). The thought of Hibiki being his son would be so appealing to him.Maybe you could do a small piece in his POV. If you could email me a response it would be highly appreciated, but if not than a regular response will do. I just want to make sure that I understand everything so that I can follow the story better. Which by the way I really like. Fist of all your grammar is better than what I have seen in long time in fanfics, but you do make some mistakes. I think they are typos from trying to let every thing in your head out fast enough so that you keep rolling. So I suggest you proof read your chapies before you post them. The whole Naruto heat thing is way over done but I like the new spin you put on it. It reminds me a little of an unfinished story I read in FF.net. Of course that one is in Spanish so I don't think you've read it unless you know the language. But there was no kid in that one but the village was in danger if he didn't get a mate. So keep up the good work and I hope that Gaara's the father. Just picturing their family makes me want to squeal like the fangirl I am. Oh and if you like GaaNaru with kids I suggest "Family Portrait" in FF.net; it starts with SasuNaru but changes because Sasu is an asshole and we all know it. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Tagger On: August 30, 2008 20:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm rooting for Gaara, but I think it will be either Itachi or Sasuke. The kid has black hair, so I think that mostly rules out Gaara. And the Hyuuga's eyes are a dominant trait in all Hyuuga relatives so that rules out Neji. And that only leaves the two brothers. But the kid does have purple eyes, which could be a blend of Gaara and Naruto's ocular genetics. I'm hoping for Gaara!
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Title: AAAAAAAHHHHH
Reviewed By: loopy911 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I freaking screemed when i got the email tellimg my you updated!!!omg~ i love the new chap by the way keep up the good work ^_^
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Mad-Hatter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love this story!!is the dad really Sus? keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good! I really want to know who the dad is. keep writing please.
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Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 18:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lovely. I enjoyed this new chapter. Please continue on with this. I am curious to see who the father is. hehe.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm.. different and rather good story. I wonder who the father will be. I'll have my fingers crossed for someone. Maybe the most unlikley person... I have yet to see a pairing of Naruto and Neji... so I'll root for them. Hehe. Please continue on with the story, I know I'll be reading it.
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