"Different Types Of Wind" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Rini Saiyan-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 18:03 CDT Comment/Review: It was certainly something else, alright. But you probably should have gone over your fic for punctuation, there was a lot of missing commas. Otherwise, it was cute in a slightly twisted way. Nice rhyme, but not all of them sounded the same.
| Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 20:35 CDT Comment/Review: O_o..... wat da hell............*shakes head* neways dat was..errr....intresting! but i must say HILLARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!! dat was funny and wierd at da same time but ok nice work and keep it up!
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