| "Into the Depths of Night" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyashaxkagomeforever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2010 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update the story!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover21911 On: March 26, 2010 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE tell me u r planing to keep going!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 10:17 CDT
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Check your spelling check your grammer fix it and it will be far more enjoyable
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2009 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great updates... seems that kagome is slowly adjusting... lots of mysteries - lost of questions no answers yet... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2009 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story since you started writing it. And I really love it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: KayAkuma On: February 04, 2009 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. It's one of the most original one's I have read. Your awesome. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: February 01, 2009 15:18 CST
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this stoy is so BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! I can't wiat until u update. i love it. i really hope that kagome isn't officially bankotsu's mate, please don;t let that happen. but for what it's worth, this story is amazing.
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Reviewed By: Night Dancer21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 11:09 CST
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This story is very entertaining. I especially enjoy the Beauty and the Beast hints now and then (whether they were intentional or not). I can't wait until the next chapter is posted! Just out of curiousity, is Kagome gonna purify Bankostu's ass stright to the seventh hell? Cuz that sounds so awesome!
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A truly refreshing fan fic. Something that hasn't been done to death. Even though there were some spelling and grammatical errors, those are easily overlooked as the story truly captivates you. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 00:30 CST
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it sounds like the next chapter will be good
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Reviewed By: laWaya_aDisi On: January 19, 2009 10:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED YOUR STYLE OF RIGHTING!!! YOU HAD SOME SPELLING ERRORS AS WELL AS A FU PLACES WHERE YOU EATHER PUT IN AN AQWORD WORD OR FORGOT TO PUT IN THE WORD. OVER ALL I LOVED IT. I CAN'T WHATE TILL YOU RIGHT THE NEXT CHAPTER.
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Reviewed By: lifes-little-chance On: November 28, 2008 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH sad! I haven't checked for updates for a loooong tim and now I did and there were like 4! But I'm already finished reading them. Please post soon I love the story and can't wait to see how it unfolds!
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: November 19, 2008 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story plz write more soon
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 20:20 CST
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Wow onli 6 chapters n im alrede hooked on dis story! Im abit confused tho. Inuyasha and 'his kind' are just regular demons right? cuz at first i was thinking vampire then i was thinking demon vampire then i was just confused and now im confused and thinking regular demon but im still not too sure if im right. Oh and wat exactly is Kagome? I get that shes a miko but is she something else cuz the way inuyasha ans sesshomaru keep talking about her they make her seem like shes somebody really special and important like 'the one' or 'the key' or something like that. Well im loving the story so far and what exactly did Bankotsu do to Kagome and did he mate her or not? And is mating the ame as in ohter stories? You know like thru intercourse or watever? lol ok well update soon! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 22:51 CST
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I understand...moving is hectic but update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great two chapters!!!! Is it possible to replace one mating mark with another??? lol...
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 17:17 CST
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This chapter made a lot of things clear Thank You Update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 20:52 CST
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I don't care about grammar mistakes just update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT story!!! Is InuYasha a full demon?
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 06:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awsome story to read. i hope u put another chappie up as soon as possible plz
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK u just threw me a whole nother curve and now i'm confused but i liked it anyway. UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! Lol! Why is everyone OOC? Well It doesn't matter! Because it's good! Is this a INU/KAG? I hope so. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 22:44 CDT
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I have to take issue with you, my dear. I've been looking for good stories all day and I was hoping yours would be the second. Yep, looking all day and found one! And then you say at the beginning of the second chapter that you've twisted everyone's personality? I have to say it's a shame because you have talent. It's rare to find an acceptable writer like you these days. People who have been reading fanfics for a while, like me, are tired of reading the same old stories over again because none of the new stories and authors are good. So when we find someone who can write like you, we get happy! But I was simply crushed when you said the characters would be OOC on purpose. It's your story so you have that right. I can only implore you to continue writing and also consider keeping the Inuyasha personalities in perspective in your next story. It's only my opinion, but I feel like once you've given them new personalities you might as well give them new names and just write an original story because it's no longer Inuyasha fanfiction without those canon personalities. But you have some great writing potential, and I'm watching you!
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Title: Into the Depths of the Night
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! I haven't read anything like this and I am so hooked! Your mystery demon has the demeaner of Sesshy. I think it's interesting how your Kagome can lock herself away into her own mind, it's not easy to do. I can't wait to see the many changes that the mo-well the pelt can change into, even though I never liked the idea of it being Sesshy's tail. Will Shippo be in it? Will both sexy demons be in it? In the first chapter the prologue, I thought I read that there were two white haired men standing by the car, if so what happened to the other? Will the demon sleep all day or just half the day? I know I have to many questions, I can be that way when I really like a story! Well your story is awesome so far and I can't wait to read more. Oh, will there be family looking for Kagome? Does she have family? I'm hooked what can I tell ya, but I can't wait for updates. I don't read stories to grade them for grammar and stuff, just for enjoyability, uniqueness, and so on. Grammar and spelling improves as a person writes, in other words I don't flame. If your brave enough to post and have confidence in what you do then you deserve respect. You go forth and update!!! Great story! Much Love Fairy Goddess
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 07:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Pirittokuru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it cant wait for the next chap.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 15:17 CDT
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this is good so far, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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does kagome have powers?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: lifes_little_chance On: March 18, 2008 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude i totally love it! Hope you post the next chapter soon!
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