| "Into the Depths of Night" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great two chapters!!!! Is it possible to replace one mating mark with another??? lol...
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 18:17 EST
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This chapter made a lot of things clear Thank You Update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 21:52 EST
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I don't care about grammar mistakes just update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 18:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT story!!! Is InuYasha a full demon?
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 07:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awsome story to read. i hope u put another chappie up as soon as possible plz
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 21:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK u just threw me a whole nother curve and now i'm confused but i liked it anyway. UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 17:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! Lol! Why is everyone OOC? Well It doesn't matter! Because it's good! Is this a INU/KAG? I hope so. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 23:44 EDT
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I have to take issue with you, my dear. I've been looking for good stories all day and I was hoping yours would be the second. Yep, looking all day and found one! And then you say at the beginning of the second chapter that you've twisted everyone's personality? I have to say it's a shame because you have talent. It's rare to find an acceptable writer like you these days. People who have been reading fanfics for a while, like me, are tired of reading the same old stories over again because none of the new stories and authors are good. So when we find someone who can write like you, we get happy! But I was simply crushed when you said the characters would be OOC on purpose. It's your story so you have that right. I can only implore you to continue writing and also consider keeping the Inuyasha personalities in perspective in your next story. It's only my opinion, but I feel like once you've given them new personalities you might as well give them new names and just write an original story because it's no longer Inuyasha fanfiction without those canon personalities. But you have some great writing potential, and I'm watching you!
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Title: Into the Depths of the Night
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! I haven't read anything like this and I am so hooked! Your mystery demon has the demeaner of Sesshy. I think it's interesting how your Kagome can lock herself away into her own mind, it's not easy to do. I can't wait to see the many changes that the mo-well the pelt can change into, even though I never liked the idea of it being Sesshy's tail. Will Shippo be in it? Will both sexy demons be in it? In the first chapter the prologue, I thought I read that there were two white haired men standing by the car, if so what happened to the other? Will the demon sleep all day or just half the day? I know I have to many questions, I can be that way when I really like a story! Well your story is awesome so far and I can't wait to read more. Oh, will there be family looking for Kagome? Does she have family? I'm hooked what can I tell ya, but I can't wait for updates. I don't read stories to grade them for grammar and stuff, just for enjoyability, uniqueness, and so on. Grammar and spelling improves as a person writes, in other words I don't flame. If your brave enough to post and have confidence in what you do then you deserve respect. You go forth and update!!! Great story! Much Love Fairy Goddess
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 08:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Pirittokuru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 16:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it cant wait for the next chap.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 16:17 EDT
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this is good so far, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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does kagome have powers?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: lifes_little_chance On: March 18, 2008 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude i totally love it! Hope you post the next chapter soon!
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