| "Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: xoxoxoxo On: September 04, 2008 08:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story and i think a sequal where the baby girl and the kid that swore to protect her (Ken?:S) are older and see what they come up against would be great
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a perfect ending. i wasn't surprised that daniel defended his mother. i hope you do write a sequel, i am curious about all of the pups they adopted and the relationship that would form between ken and hana. excellent story. i enjoyed reading it.
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Title: youkailover1
Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it was possible to rate the enjoyment factor any higher than a 10 I would!! I loved the last chapter and I found it to be a lovely ending. Cohesive, sweet and moving. I don't think a sequel is necessary but thats up to you as the author whether or not you have more in your head! :) I liked it and thanks for the pleasure of reading it!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 15:46 CDT
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can we say dead wind witch? kagura is so dead that it's funny. the last thing you ever want to do is threaten to harm what is his. update soon. i want to know how dead kagura is.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 15:42 CDT
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i figured nev would be able to calm a feral pup. she really is something special. update soon.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 02:25 CDT
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keep it up. this story is wonderful. i think nev made quite impression on sess's mother, which is good. update soon.
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Reviewed By: pretty_princess_2k6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, I just absolutely loved this story. 100/100 ^-^ Keep up the good work.
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