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Reviewed By: lalalaland On: April 27, 2008 01:13 CDT Comment/Review: i love the plot nd the person below me is rite proof read plzz!!! update soon!! cauz u just love me :D
Title: Review Reviewed By: Defacto99 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 16:25 CDT Rating(s): Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey dude, -Overall, I love the piece. It stands out and is really creative. Just one things bothers me an extreme amount. And it is GRAMMER and SPELLING. Dude, in one of the chapters it said "inuyasha said to Inuyasha." You definetely need to proofread more. If you proofread, make it a bit more understandable, and capitalize and crud like that, like "InuYasha...," then it will be a perfect score in my eyes. Use my advice! Peace.

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