| "To Heal a Broken Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... sad that kagome is paralyzed... hope she can walk again... also hope kagome gets pregnant again and keep it this time... lots of wishful suggestions... glad that kagome & her mother made up though... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is great i really like it please update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that hojo it out of the picture... hope kagome will be fine... will she still be pregnant... how did kikyo know...is it almost done yet... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 16:02 CDT
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this is great i can't wait until the next update so please update soon
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Reviewed By: DPVS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes some mistakes , but Kagome kinda reminds me of one of my characters for a story I'm writing . But it's a cool story anyway . Kind of depressing Kagome gets shot.
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 08:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is great i can't wait to update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... can't believe kagome got shot... and now inuyasha & kagome are back together because of it... glad that inuyasha & kagome are together again... and kagome & kikyo have made a truce... is kikyo's intentions really just friendship with inuyasha like she says... or is it almost done or still long way to go?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 05:36 CDT
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this is starting to ache my heart. I don't think I want to read this anymore as it brings me close to tears
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 13:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is great i really like it please update soon
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Reviewed By: vampress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is real life drama! Wow I really enjoyed the first chapter even though it is short but was very powerful in the telling. Now on to read the rest, hope it is as good as your opening chapter.
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Title: umm yeah
Reviewed By: hans359 On: March 16, 2008 18:55 CDT
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You should really find a beta to look over and edit your story. It is an okay plot but you dont always use good english and there are alot of punctuation errors.
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