| "Once Upon a Time" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: author's note
Reviewed By: the author of Once Upon a Time On: May 12, 2008 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE I appreciate the support but as I have put up, this story is DISCONTINUED. For those of you who don't have a dictionary, that means that I will not be continuing to write this story. I am touched by the thoughtful comments (and neibelung, I too am not very ond of Kikyo, this fic supposedly was to leave Kikyo in the dust...), but I was left uninspired as to the ending. If you wish to know the main gist of the conclusion, it is on my author profile. Sorry again.
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Reviewed By: neibelung On: April 19, 2008 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is not that this is a bad story. You have an excellent writing style. It is a great story to read if you like Kikyo. Your personality for her is excellent. However, leaving Kagome in the slums leaves much to be desired. Wouldn't Kagome's mom or brother even recognize her? In any case, I just don't like Kikyo. So, reading this is torture.
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 18:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.o only 2 reviews???? ok dats dumb dis stori is awsome EVERYONE shuld b reviewing it! i luv dis fic keep it up i gat u on my favs to c wen u update and also becuz dis is such a gud fic, now update!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo your back!!! and Kikyo is going to be the queen?? god help us all >.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i cant believe no1 has commented.... i like this ^^ please continue ^^
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