| "Zanpaku-to?" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: Yachiru's intellegence
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2009 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed that Yachiru could disect a document and be able to tell who wrote it from writing style. Makes me think she uses her cuteness as a cover for far more things. I really liked that hidden side to her nature you showed. Slowly you're revealing more dimensions to Squad 11 that round out these characters and make them even more endearing. Of all the squads in bleach, I always enjoyed 11 for some reason. They seem the most honest and levelheaded of the squads (I may have said that before), but also very clever and cunning. Able to use their opponents weaknesses as strengths. I am intrigued how Zaraki's zanpakuto seems to be helping him work better with his squadmates. Continue with the intriguing writing.
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Title: Another terrific chapter
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 12:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, where to start. I've been reading this from the beginning and I'm extremely impressed with the Zanpakuto you came up with for Zaraki. You've given it a lot of thought and the personality of the spirit is well developed. Interactions... I love Zaraki's interaction with his squad members. Each of them is fully developed. I find myself wanting to know more about Squad 11, and you provide a great amount of detail here that makes it entertaining. In this specific chapter I like how Zaraki lets Rukia sit on his shoulder. Also the bet that Renji had with Madrame regarding Kuchiki's scarf had me giggling. That is perfectly in keeping with their characters. Having people watch the fight and describe what was going on was a refreshing change from hearing the fight simply described in narrative. You got to see everyone's individual thoughts that way. I am interested to find out what 'Piecrust''s secret it. Also what they end up doing with the dolls.
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Title: Fantastic! Keep em coming!
Reviewed By: Azhwi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 04:39 EDT
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Really do enjoy this story. It's nice to see Kenpachi's character being developed as well as the relationships between himself and his own team members. Now others are being drawn into the circle. It's great! He may not be crazy about making new "friends" but it definitely makes for an interesting story. Thank you for writing this!
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Title: ooooh
Reviewed By: bairdie On: April 06, 2009 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh very nice turn at the end there. i must admit that once the hollow dream thing started it seemed quite a likely possiblity, given the way souls seem to work in bleach cannon, but its still a nice little surprise. i also found some of the plans for the revenges amusing. i also found it quite interesting that you put in the possibility of some nemuxyumi. i liked the interactions between unohana and madarame/yumi as well.
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Reviewed By: bairdie On: February 17, 2009 19:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
another few good chapters. i got the impression from the fight that the too late ability kinda bit kenpachi in the arse (so to speak) as immediatly after insulting the pigeon he accidentally mortally wounded baldy-chan lol. as ever the writing style and pace are excellent. i cant wait to find out just what kenpachi needs with dolls though
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Title: dolls...
Reviewed By: Star Lyria Uchiha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 18:10 EST
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the dolls again...What have you planed with them...? any way I kinda like the twist where baldy almost gets killed lol... any way, again, another good chapter!
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Title: Nice work;-)
Reviewed By: Kishu On: January 24, 2009 13:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Respect! I must admit that your fic is the first one that made me react so far. Original idea and a very catchy style of writing. I also appreciate the intelligent humour and references to wellknown philosophers and writers. I just love the idea of Zaraki Kenpachi reading The Art of War from Sun Tsu. It made me read my copy again:-P Please upload as soon as possible, really looking forward to it. Ganbatte!! "thumbs up"
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Title: again awesome
Reviewed By: Star Lyria Uchiha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 21:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again awesome... I kinda worry about the dolls though.....though I bet it will be something awesome. keep writing this awesome bleach fan fic. also I like how you keep up sorta with the current plot.
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 22:06 EST
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^-^ just dropping by. anyways, nice fic. very very nice!
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Reviewed By: bairdie On: December 13, 2008 06:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good couple of installments. i like the way your going with the reiatsu control thing, as ive always felt that thought or emotion alone arent adequate for understanding, but both combined provide us with all we need to get on properly with our lives :) i cant wait to see what happens with the poor sod (ikakku?) kenpachi tries to practice his control with lol.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Star Lyria Uchiha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter! I hope you keep writing I can't stop checking back for new chapters!!! I wonder who the spies are... Add a new chapter soon because the waiting kills me... over all thanx for writing this awesome fan fic!! ~Star Uchiha (Chelly)
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Title: ch16 review
Reviewed By: tidus87lion On: November 03, 2008 19:05 EST
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i hate Kurotsuchi with a passion. he's so disgusting.
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Title: ch15 review
Reviewed By: tidus87lion On: November 03, 2008 18:47 EST
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lol. telling her to play with dolls is a death wish.
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Title: >.
Reviewed By: .yuwa On: October 30, 2008 23:30 EDT
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oh! im sry i havent read any fics lately...kinda busy on DeviantArt...well i really like this one. keep it up! ^-^v
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Reviewed By: tidus_lion87 On: October 28, 2008 16:32 EDT
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cool. good start.
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