| "Zanpaku-to?" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: well written again
Reviewed By: bairdie On: October 28, 2008 03:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chapter. i cant wait to see how the various threads unfold; especially regarding pie-crust; i get the impression that he is going to be surprisingly important to kenpachi's progression here, especially given that last chapter yamajii ordered kenny to train him. and on the note re shakespeare, i recognised the style (it is rather unique imo) but not the actual play or sonnet its from, and hes not quite so read about as he deserves to be, so dont be surprised that it didnt click, but its not your fault either :)
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Reviewed By: Star Uchiha On: October 14, 2008 17:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!!!!
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Reviewed By: .yuwa On: October 01, 2008 22:47 EDT
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oohhh preety nice...
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Title: another good few chapters
Reviewed By: bairdie On: October 01, 2008 05:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is continuing to be interesting ^_^ im secretly hoping retsu and ken-chan form a league to oust kurostuchi for his inhumanity hehehe... i definitly like where your going with ken's character here; to me it seems quite plausable that under his supposed gormless exterior is a surprisingly sharp intellect.
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Reviewed By: bairdie On: September 05, 2008 17:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good. the first chapter concerned me given its legnth, but the rest is excellent :) i really like the interactions between zaraki and his blade, makes for some good reading. and i think youve got the characters down pat here. good show! oh-and you said theres to be no romance in this, and thats understandable, but i reckon youve got the groundworks of a friendship here, thatd make a really good 2nd/alternate story arch, now youve got 3 beginning to intertwine :)
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 01:06 EDT
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no romance. no prob... im fine without it. nice chap ^-^v
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Title: *urgh*
Reviewed By: .yuwa On: July 15, 2008 02:35 EDT
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*gasp*...aspirin!!!... *thud*...*rustle*(gets up and concentrates on typing)...n-n-nice on *thud*
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 06:46 EDT
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^-^ filler chap...
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 03:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
hmm...good...what do you mean by your 1st chap a/n?
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