Reviewed By: theForbidden [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahh, how very depressing my dear. Hmm, I wonder...? Is this story based upon true life? I distintly remember a situation much like this, except the main character within my memory has yet to die. Why did you kill off the main girl though? I think it may have been better had she simply walked away. This short sampling displays your talent much further than your other, that Blood and Leaves fan fic you are writing. This style seems to entice me, and has me equally astounded by the traumatizing end which you have spun. Continue to write Alicia, and I promise that you will begin to truly understand the knowledge which evades you.
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