Reviewed By:Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 06:50 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Good story but!!!! Your writing it like my mothers when she get on the computer!!!! SPACES after a .?, (and other punctuation please!!!!!!) It gets rather crammed up and doesn't look so good... but otherwise It's good... (although with all of your (must be adult to read I keep on thinking that you are going to have something 'naughty' in the chapter and then I realize that it must be in a later chapter that you plan to write...
Reviewed By:anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 15:24 CDT Comment/Review: finally a story about rin and sess! you have an interesting prologue so far. a story where sess is willing to marry a human. its good to know your prologue is short but the chapters are longer. looking forward to the next chapter!
