| "Love, Money, Lies, Betrayal, Heartbreak, Pain, Lust, The Life Of A Human..." Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a great start. I really would like you to continue and write more. You said there was language it wasn't to bad so far. I look forward to the Hitomi/Van lemons *hint hint* and everything else. How will things work out for Hitomi and Van and everything else on Earth? I hope you write more.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Omi Bombay On: May 27, 2004 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess it's pretty uselss asking you to update this fic. I wish it wasn't though. I really would like to read the rest of it. Maybe you can post again? Even if it has been almost 2 years ^_^;; ~Omi
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Reviewed By: Zsenny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: nARIA On: January 18, 2004 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: punk On: April 21, 2003 16:09 CDT
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good stuff. the waitress is totally a bitch. i cant wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: SabineballZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 17:45 CST
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This story sounds totaly cool! I hope you go on soon!!! |
Reviewed By: SabineballZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 17:45 CST
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This story sounds totaly cool! I hope you go on soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan girl 88 On: March 02, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really good. You are a very good writer. I am very eager to find out what happens. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: stardust04 On: December 23, 2002 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
c'on man where is the rest of it. please add more chaps!!!!!! I can't stand the wait!!! |
Reviewed By: Vampira Roja On: December 15, 2002 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, this fic was pretty good. Although Van's reason for leaving his country was a bit unreal and what I think is out of character, I saw that you had to make it that way so that you could get Van to stay on Earth with Hitomi. Considering that, you picked the best way to do it. *claps* Anyway, you have great writing skills and I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this story. I'm eager to find out what happens between Van and Hitomi, and what the waitress is going to try to do to break them up. She sounds like she's gonna be a pain in the butt for the next few chapters. Oh well, from what I can tell by what you wrote, she's in for a big surprise when she finds out that she won't get Van no matter what she says, looks like, or does. lol. Please write more of this fic soon. It's fairly good, and I want to know what happens next. PLEASE update it. Please, please, pretty please... |
Reviewed By: maybop On: November 03, 2002 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a great writer! there is nothing under Spelling and grammar becasue i wouldn't be able to tell it anyways. BUt keep going this is a great story! |
Reviewed By: MLG On: October 19, 2002 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it.
It was detailed and I just love the way Van has come to earth. |
Reviewed By: Ani - latina On: September 19, 2002 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font ColorI really liked your fic even tho i only got to read 1 chapter plzzzz get the others chapters in i cant weant to to read it =) |
Reviewed By: Dilandaus_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 15:03 CDT
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I did enjoy this. I hope you bring out a new chapter soon and it should be interesting how you aply the lemon to it. I'll keep my eyes open for an update. x |
