Reviewed By:Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 15:37 CDT Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: You have a good Plot for your story. And I enjoyed reading it. The only thing I have to say would maybe do some more proof reading to catch those spelling or grammar errors that sneak by you. Or have someone else proof read before you post. That way you minimize the amount of errors that may have been missed. But other than that, it wasn't too bad a read. I enjoyed it. Update soon.
