| "It is you I have loved" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 21:17 CDT
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Cute, I've really enjoyed reading it. Got to say though, I hate to see anyone left out in the cold. Solution? Get a bigger bed. ;) can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Michael25 On: August 31, 2008 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it and can't wait to read more soon hopefully.
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 16:52 CDT
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it's a real good fic I love it,,to bad kags couldn't pick both brothers,My fav are sessand kags but I do fansy some inu and kags and the kags,,inu and sess love thse to,,I guess I'm twisted lol
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Reviewed By: AnimeLadyPIMP(not logged in) On: July 17, 2008 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn Kinky-hoe!!! I hate kikyo haha please update.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 20:34 CDT
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kikyo needs to die. poor kagome now she is truly fighting for her life and no one can help her with it. and on top of that, i think she is torn between both brothers. update soon. i want to know more.
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Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 22:21 CDT
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OMG I said Seddy! Typo big time, I should wear my glasses next time I review. Sorry about that. I said you fic, I should go to bed, I'm grading my review for errors! Update soon. LOL
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Title: It is you I have Loved
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this should be a Seddhy/Kaogme?Inuyashia pairing! Come on two fine strong demons fighting over you. There is not way I would be able to choose. I love your version of the characters and it's interesting to see Sessy have to deal with so many emotions and still keep him as Sesshy as possible, you did or doing a great job with that. I love you fic, I can't wait to read more. Update soon, good luck with Chemistry and Bio class, for me it's Algebra, I swear it's trying to kill me! Algebra that killed the Fairy Goddess, good making for a story. LOL. Good luck can't wait for more. Write on! Much Love Fairy Goddess
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Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey why dont u make it a inu/kag/sess fic. u almost have been writing it that way, ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 08:48 CDT
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awww how sweet Sessy is! Im wondering what is going to happen next... awww and worried Inu!!
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Title: Dont leave me hangin!
Reviewed By: sango-san On: June 11, 2008 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story please keep posting! I wanna know what happens!
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 03:38 CDT
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oh my god oh my god oh my god!!! Soo good:D:D Please update soon.. Im dying to know what happens next. :D:D
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 01:23 CDT
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talk aboaut a nice little cliffhanger. which side is kagome trapped on? and did sesshomaru's whip hit inuyasha. questions, questions. i am looking forward to the next chapter. update soon!!
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Title: It is you I have loved
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think your Kaogme is stupid or a wuss, feelings of love and anger are hard to deal with sometime and we've all done stupid things in those messed up moments, be it sex with the wrong guy/girl and you regret it, because you weren't thinking right or that stupid thing that got you sick or arrested, or something stupid came out of your mouth that you wish you can take back. The thing is your Kagome is trying to deal with it, and take responsibility for her actions and trying not to make the same mistakes. She is being a real teen and maybe an adult. Humans aren't perfect no matter how much we try to be. Thank goodnes or we will all be boring. I love your story I should have reviewed it when I started reading it, it deserves it. I'm really enjoying it. You've got a good story line going. Don't worry about that chapeter all stories have fillers, I thought it was pretty good, letting us see how Kagome is handling everything, and learning what is going through her head. I can't wait for more. update soon. I'm glad your not dead. Much Love Fairy Goddess.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... things are getting complicated for the triangle... what will kagome do now?... who will she be with?... what will inuyasha & sesshoumaru do?... so many questions but no answers yet... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: May 01, 2008 22:36 CDT
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I really like your story; please update soon.
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is getting very interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: April 30, 2008 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far and the writing is well done. Inyuasha and Kagome belong together even if they both can't fess up yet. So lets get to it. Besides her and Shess don't know each other that wel and he's tryied to kill them before.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 07:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: PLEASE!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Princess Stormcloud0217 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I beg of you, write a lemon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pretty pretty please, with a chery on top, and all the love, kindness, romance, and skimpieness in the world!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your gonna have to call Yuka.... oh god... how will the (other) boys react to the date????
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy like. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Princess Stormcloud0217 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this,but as a twist,you need a lemon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story.... (reading while doing homework... the pages take a long time to load) Sesshy only uses 3 person speak because that is some thing a lot of girls use in Japan (because its sometimes shorter to use your name than to use the polite for of me or I for a girl....) and the Male I forms have different meanings too than just I ("The choice of words used as pronouns is correlated with the sex of the speaker and the social situation in which they are spoken: men and women alike in a formal situation generally refer to themselves as watashi (私 "private") or watakushi (also 私), while men in rougher or intimate conversation are much more likely to use the word ore (俺 "oneself", "myself") or boku."-Wikipedia)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 23:08 CDT
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this is quite interesting and humorous at times. it is well written but the gremlins at mediaminor can eat line breaks and make a perfectly wonderful story look like it's written in one long paragraph. please add a few blank lines between each paragraph, not only will it be prettier but it will be infinitely easier to read. . . one is unsure of who she will end up with as i'm not sure if youkai society frown on polygamy. i hope you don't mind but this reader will be rooting for the yash/kag unless there is the youkai version of fundamentalist mormonism practicing plural marriage. ~ doumo arigatou gozaimasu, ginny
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