| "Piccolo's Heart... THE PLAY!" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Hottie On: November 06, 2002 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very wonderful please write more to this play |
Reviewed By: Foxie FeFe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2002 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW:O |
Reviewed By: heather On: August 16, 2002 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
piccoll came from a egg kind of funny huu he camr from a egg hahahahahahahahaha sorry bye
still from a egg |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 19:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is so adorable! ^_^ Interesting character you've got there. ;) Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 16:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
bulma covered in a chocolaty substance eh... bet Vegeta will LOVE that *heheh* sorry, my dirty mind is in overdrive *heh* |
Reviewed By: Shadow_Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 04:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've seen your wonderful stories on Fanfiction Net. ^_^ I went by Emerald Princess now Shadow+Impmon. I just can't get enough of this story! *grins* |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 01:22 CDT
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LMAOh the pain from laughing so hard!
since you've past the point I was thinking of.. I was thinking about the 'evil in the heart' thing.. Piccolo had evil in his heart at one time, I was wondering if you were gonna add a little angst and have him be turned *LOL* that would have been interesting.. even more so if you had the fact that Kami and Nail are in there cancle out Babadi's power thus keeping Piccolo from going Majin *heheh*
can't wait to see how things go on.. You should have made Shin allow you to have a Namek/Human baby *heheh* ok I'll stop now |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 09:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww.. poor Piccolo, being put in such a sitation hehehe course I'm loving every minute of it.. I however had a little theory going in my head, I wonder if you picked it up too, but I won't say anything, wouldn't want to ruin anything.. however if you're curious, just email me *evil laugh* ;) |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 13:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehehe this is just so cute! I love it |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 On: July 08, 2002 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Weeheee! Funny new chapter.
> "Kim {Xellos impersonation}: Now that’s a secret."
LOL! That was good!
Go on with the great work.
^_^ |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You left it THERE!! How could you leave us hangin like that!! Oh, you're evil! Evil I tell you! NEways, I totally love this fic. You've inspired me to write a self insertion fic of my own. ^^ (Yes, that IS scary. *grins*) Your writing is amazing (although I think I mentioned that before) and the humor you put in this... !! OMG!! It's totally hilarious! You had me rollin nearly the entire time! Great job girl! I'm waitin on more! *taps foot impatiently* Hurry up with the next part already! I wanna see what happens at the tournament! ^^v |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 22:32 CDT
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LOL! that was funny! and that wedding thing is just too funny. poor Pici hehe. i think i like that name for him it's just like Vegeta's nick name. and i agre with Psyfire pplz must be nuts to not reveiw.
must read more,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*huge grin* I'm totally loving this!!! And I'm just on the first chapter! I love Piccolo fics (duh). There's not that many of em out there. I've started to read your work from fanfiction.net but we all know how that's gone lately. Glad you've posted your stuff here! The first chapter was hilarious!! Seriously, I was rollin! You write extremely well. And the enjoyment factor on this thing should get at least a 1600. ^^ Good work!! Can't wait to read more!! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 14:37 CDT
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no way.. no reviews? People are insane, this just proves it :) I think the story is VERY cute.. I usually don't read the self insertians but this one is done very nicely.. hehe and who can pass up Piccolo being put in his place LOL |
