| "Love Song" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love the rewrite. I has so much more detail than the first. I think you should turn this one shot into a continuation. it would turn out really nice.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 05:30 CDT
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i liked both versions. the first was pure emotion, in it's simplicity. the second expanded on the emotions, without overplaying them. i love how you worked the words in at the end. i'm glad that you didn't change that.
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 02:29 CDT
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Life works in really strange ways sometimes. I was browsing around looking for a one-shot to read and stumbled across this one. It was only after I read it that I realized it was you who wrote it hahaha Well I guess you could say I'm returning the favour the number of pleasant reviews you've left for me :) I particularly liked this one shot because even though the ending was left open it felt complete. I also have a love for the Cure and 311 so you really couldn't go wrong there either. I had to say, I was rather happy you chose to have him return to Kagome. Kikyo may have had his heart once, but not anymore. Though I despise Kikyo's character I thought she maybe could have used more of an explanation than what she got considering their history, but the one you've written works too, just the way it is. Nice work. It was a pleasure to read. ~ Langus
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 20:11 CDT
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ima go wit SplendentGoddess u shoulda made dis longer but its wonderful!!! i really luved it! i hope she was awake to hear wat he said ;)!!!!! nice work and keep it up ^_^!!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My only complaint is that I wish this was longer. Beautifully written, well done.
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