| "Anything's Possible: V2.0" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! That was amazing!!! Okay, so I gotta say that I read the first version and the second verson. I'm not nocking the first version, but it wasn't too developed. And here! So good! I liked how much more developed it's become and I gotta say it was truly impressive to read. I quite enjoyed it too, and though I wish your chapters were longer, I do appreciate what you've already written and hope to read more at your next update. Please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually this is very different from the original a lot more detail!!! they can both stand on their own but I cant wait for a new chapter!!!
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Title: More please
Reviewed By: df On: March 22, 2009 00:41 CDT
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I'm so happy you've updated! I'm glad Vegeta saved Jen (can't have him lose his first and only student now). I also like your concept with the Saiyan tail and that Jen decided to tell Vegeta that he does eventually become a Super Saiyan. Hmmm...as for what to happen next, I'm thinking of a VxB lemon. Hope you can continue soon! By the way, where's Kitsune?
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Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 02:30 CDT
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All I've read is the prologue, but...wow! I think I am going to be sacrificing an entire nights sleep to finish this.
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Title: Very Creative
Reviewed By: df On: February 24, 2009 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is turning out to be a very interesting story. I normally don't go for stories pertaining to Saiyan OC's (mostly because they turn out to be Mary-Sues), but something about your story drew me in. I really like your OC, Jen. She's believable, mature, and well-written (I can tell you put the time and effort into creating her). I also like that you've kept Bulma, Goku, and Vegeta IC. Can't wait for the next chapter, though take your time if you need to. Just know this is a great fic!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Kizkid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cool!! please write more ^_^
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