| "Returning the Favor" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Gdemonpet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story :D I loved it! It was really really good and I liked how Sesshomaru stayed in character really well :D Plus I like the other characters you have like Kai and Nazu. :D really cool :D
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 04:36 CDT
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By the way, you spelled "Education" in your profile wrong...
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 04:33 CDT
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You should really make it so that different characters that are talking have their "speech" separated from other paragraphs and other people talking. Your paragraphs are HUGE and hard to read because they are so big. You should also chop them down a bit into smaller morsels. Also, having the words in bold are sometimes hard to read for some people because the bold makes all the words kind of...mush together. Please take these into consideration, ESPECIALLY the paragraphs and the character speech part. :) Ciao
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Title: Whew!!!
Reviewed By: Angel/Sesshomaru_Kagome_Lover_4ever On: May 06, 2008 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy!! I am still very hot from reading your story!! Whew!!!!!! ::trys to keep breathing so she can stay alive::..Man...I think a cold shower sounds wonderful!!!!! Lo! Oh. And I am your newest fan!!! Angel!! Lol. Please keep updating...it would be a shame for a good story to be delayed!! Well...Thank you for writing a story I enjoy ^.^!!!
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 23:47 CDT
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i really like youre story, it has a good plot...but you've lost me at some points. you switched scenes a few times in the past chapters and i had to backtrack and reread them just to understand what was going on. if you could possibly clarify a little bit more, that would be great. all in all...good job and keep the chapters coming:D
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Revine On: March 30, 2008 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, it's very interesting and it definately is worth the read. Other than a few minor grammical errors, the story is 100% perfect...well in my eyes anyway. Anyway I look forward to an update and I hope to see one soon! Ja Ne, Revine
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Reviewed By: C.A.Q On: March 30, 2008 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i hate you for leaving it off in a cliffy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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