Title: Heyya
Reviewed By: hfcs [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the rhetorical sophistication is nice... The writing style is present and defined, but slightly weak and not very OOmPH. It wasn't original at all. Everyone has written about the jester and the royalty (but usually it's the princess) hooking up in an illicit romance. It wasn't my kind of thing but it was written nicely, so w/e... And Will :P ilu it's hfcs and i'm BORED and trying to upload my fatty HUGE unfinished story, my three short stories, my other semi-short story and two chapters of my latest.
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