| "A Forbidden Love of an Angel and Devil" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was amazing! Thanks for the long chapter! I loved everything that happened!!! I absolutely love you now! I'm so sad about Vincent's mom!! *gasp* And I'm way happy that Atsui came to grips with Vincent loving him and loving him back. I want them to be together!! You know... like... *makes irratic hand gestures* and stuff. I'm so content with this... but, being greedy, I need to read more. Please quench my thirst for good literature. Best Reguards(Love), ~F-J
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Title: Phenominal
Reviewed By: Flaming Jello [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazingly well written! ^.^ Absolutely love it. The inner conflict that Atsui has is a total vacuum and its sucking up all my attention. Please update soon. And a little more dialogue would be nice... ^.^' but its just a suggestion...
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Reviewed By: drpeng89 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 01:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
surprisingly... i want to know what happens next... and unfortunately i've read worse... not bad you guys...
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