| "The Weight Of The World" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: GilbertDrone328 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! Interesting story thus far.
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Reviewed By: S J Smith On: July 06, 2008 18:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love Ed and Al's reactions to this. They seem very in character. Roy brushing off Riza is sad - I hope they get together; I like them as a couple. Are you considering bringing in Winry at all? (is a big Ed/Win fan...)
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Reviewed By: AlmightySquirrelQueen On: July 06, 2008 18:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aw! D:. Poor, poor Elicia! So sad, but this story looks good! Update soon, k? (:
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Reviewed By: Bar-Ohki On: July 06, 2008 18:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
O! Good start!
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Reviewed By: Vejhed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 18:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG that's sad. Are you going to make another chapter? Plz do!
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