| "Goodbye To Romance" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 06:24 CDT
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wow! two chapters in one day! how prolific of you! i love it. this story has captured my interest like no other. i think it's partially due to the lack of flowery prose so many authors try to insert in their stories. it is what it is, and it is good! i love inuyasha's dreams. the rock star image fit him well. and his guide is the best original characterization i've ever read. kagome and he are a fated couple, huh? so now he knows where he will end up. i can't wait to read the exchange you have planned for him and his parents. thank you for your wonderful posts. they made my weekend.
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Reviewed By: inusakura_19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it i love it, please keep on writing, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This is unlike anything I've ever read. It's soooo good! Keep writing, I'm dying to find out what happens now now that InuYasha's parents showed up. And about this villain you've created. Also, how Kag and Inu are gonna make up. You've written everything so well, I mean...unlike most you didn't make Kikyou a bitch, you made the inu group the bad guys WITHOUT making them seem out-of-character, your original characters (like Toshi) don't steal the spotlight but are just as interesting as the canon characters, and your villain (the nameless guy) is even cooler than naraku! Kudos on the makings of a great fanfiction. You DEFINETELY have a reader in me, so don't keep me waiting too long with the next chapter, lol. :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 15:42 CDT
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i just found this this morning, and even took the chance of reading it at work. it was that good. there are a few small technicalities that need cheaning up, but this is one of the most riviting stories i have read. there is an intensity that is impossible to ignore. the pace is almost too fast at times. but you have managed to keep it going without it seeming forced. however you're pacing it, keep it up, because i can't wait to read more. thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 23:39 CDT
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Good story...can't believe Kagome didn't think of the consequences of Inu finding out...that she allowed the others to convince her to keep drugging him. Seems like Inu is alright now but gotta wonder if he'll ever trust the group again. Looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: The Reaper On: April 23, 2008 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, very nice indeed. I have added this one to my favorites. Please continue writing whenever possible. Your Faithful New Reader, Reaper
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 19:32 CDT
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I just gotta ask... the cheese guy in the dream is from Buffy right?
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, oh... you posted it here too!!! Way to go boy!!!! Funny, was reading it again today!!! Just wanted to say hello but you see... will follow you at your usual place, but, but, will come here just to cheer f/you!!! :hugs: Hey, hope you upload the other ones too!!! :)
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