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| "The True Purpose" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Title: Phew! 65 Chapters in 2 days!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 03, 2008 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me just say that I enjoyed this story greatly and was very happy to dedicate 48 hours to it! Much fun, and very compelling! I stumbled apon this story by accident and from your summery I wasent able to quite figure out what it was about. Figuring 'what the hell' I started to read and before I knew it it was 11 o'clock at night!!! A very fun read, I enjoyed almost every twist and turn, im not a big fan of rape (at all) though I stomach it if it has a pupose in a story. I would happily read a sequal if there is to be one but as a reader I am happily satisfied with this ending. Thank you very much for posting and I hope to see more of your work and ALOT more reviews for this story b/c it deserves better than 8 reviews. Me thinks you babied your readers tehee, but the summery was a little vage ^^' Heres perfect 10s from me (I dont do spelling/grammer b/c I suck at it so im not one to talk) Until next time, Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: freakie On: April 21, 2008 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it and i am waiting for your sequel(i didn;t read your other story, but it is time to do so!
| Reviewed By: Rox On: April 06, 2008 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firstly, I rated this fic highly because it is enjoyable, but I refrained from commenting on your style of writing because personally I hate script styles, but that would be biased so I did not comment and your story was good notwithstanding. Now the rest of this comment is not really about this fic, but because I can't leave a comment at where I read your fics, I decided to write it here. I read the Inuyasha/Shippo story on AdultFanfiction, it was quite good, I believe the reason for a small readership is because that ship is not popular and is not looked for. I only noticed it because I was reading your other fic (which I also enjoyed)because you mentioned it in that fic and because I was intrigued with how you portrayed Shippo. So I think with time the readership will increase, if not for an interest in Shippo, but because they read your other story and like how you tell a story and will check it out. On another note, is your Shippo story truly at an end? I must say if that is your ending I am not really satisfied, it just seems more could be developed, even if its with an epilogue, just to see the dynamics of Shippo's and Inuyasha's relationship, and to see if they have more kids, hehe and if they live long enough to meet Kagome in the future. It doesn't have to be the exact things I mentioned, but just something else, please (begs prettily):) Thanx for the lovely fics.
| Title: the true purpose
Reviewed By: me On: April 02, 2008 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for this delightful story. The only thing I would change would be identifying each character before you have them speak (where you have their names written in bold). I was able to ignore this and read the story, but I would have found it more enjoyable if I didn't have to filter it. Keep up the good work. A sequel sounds like a good idea, after all what kind of mates will the puppies find when they grow up?
| Reviewed By: Polka dot On: March 31, 2008 22:26 CDT
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I finally got through it all. It was a very interesting writing style. It was nice that you resolved everything.
| Reviewed By: Shadowwolfie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. The style was different then any other fanfic I've read and It held together so well. A sequal would be wonderfull it's too good a story to simply let end here.
| Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 02:08 CDT
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this was such a good story. i would like an epilouge or sequel giving some info on kagome. how does she feel with the well destroyed? what happens when the shikon returns to her? does she meet shippo, inuyasha, sesshomaru, kouga, ect later?
| Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 16:17 CDT
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this is such a good story, i'm sorry nobody else is reviewing it. i hope shippo will be ok, please let us know what happens with him.
| Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 15:04 CDT
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i love this story! i'm sorry for not reviewing earlier but i was going to wait until the end. you said you have the story all typed up and it just needs posted, so could you please post a bit faster i have to see if shippo is alright.
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