| "The Element of Surprise" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 04:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was adorably cute. I love the interaction you had between them and the believability that their characters would grow up to act just like you portrayed them. Plus, did I mention this is adorable? ^_-
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 15:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was great! what happens next? i would love to see how their relationship progresses (especially with daddy sess around). there arent enought shippo/rin stories (or enough shippo/anyone) so please write more to this.
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